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That Good Night (12/?)
So, wow, it's been over a year since I last posted a chapter of this story. You could be forgiven for thinking this was an abandoned WIP. But no! It's aliiiiiiive!!!

Thanks, [info]yourlibrarian, for your prompt beta-reading and infinite patience!

Title: That Good Night (part 12 of ?)
Rating: NC-17 (barely)
Pairing: Spike/Xander, ensemble
Continuity info: This is the sixth story in the Fragments 'verse, fitting in immediately after Before the Time of Dawn.
Summary: A couple of years post-NFA, Spike is human, and it isn’t working out so well. He and Xander are currently in Sao Paulo, where Willow has just had a baby and a new vampire problem is looming.
Warnings: This story will get dark at times. Definitely angsty, h/c with lots of hurt. Character death will most definitely be threatened, and I'd rather not say what comes of it (though if you're terribly worried, ask me privately).

Previous chapters [here].

This update is about 2000 words; the total length now stands at about 40,000.

If you’d like email notification of updates, please let me know either in comments or by email at shadowscast at yahoo dot com.

I hope to bring you the next chapter in less than a year! (Woohoo, setting the bar nice and low!)


Chapter 12


Gabriel was smaller than Buffy remembered. That must be the difference between standing in an alley with a knife and lying in a hospital bed. He was curled up on his side, awake, staring into space with a sullen glare. He didn’t acknowledge Kennedy and Buffy until Kennedy yanked the privacy curtain around the bed, cutting the three of them off from the ward. Then he muttered something under his breath. Kennedy raised an eyebrow and said something that made him roll his eyes.

“Hey, translation for the Portuguese-impaired?” Buffy prodded her.

“Right,” Kennedy said, impatiently. “So far we’ve established that I’m a cunt, and he’s a nasty little beast.”

Buffy flashed a conciliatory smile in Gabriel’s direction. “Could you try being nice to him so maybe he’ll talk to us? Just, you know, an idea.”

Kennedy grimaced. She said something else to Gabriel, and he snarled a response. The information-getting plan did not seem to be going well.

Stuck listening without understanding, Buffy watched Gabriel as Kennedy persisted in questioning him. His arms were scrawny, with scabbed elbows; his shaggy black hair needed some serious lather, rinse, repeat. She guessed he was homeless.

She tried to imagine what it would be like to be that young, lost and alone. She couldn’t, really. Even when she’d been a teenaged runaway herself, the closest she’d come to roughing it had been a few nights in an L.A. youth hostel.

“Tell him I can give him a home,” she said abruptly.

Kennedy gave her a startled, puzzled look. “What?”

“If he’ll tell us what Carlos is up to, tell us where the nest is, then I’ll take him back to Rome.”

“Are you serious?”

“Sure.” Buffy thought fast, justifying the plan in her own mind as she spoke. “The Council’s all set up with the residential school for new Slayers. No reason he couldn’t live there too. He could train as a Watcher. Andrew would love to have a protégé.”

Kennedy looked supremely unconvinced. “What makes you think this kid would want to be a Watcher? Last night he looked ready to join the fucking vampires.”

“Just try to make it sound good,” Buffy said. “It’s gotta be better than what he’s got now.”

From the tone of Kennedy’s voice as she addressed Gabriel again, Buffy guessed that she wasn’t trying her hardest to sell the idea. The change in Gabriel’s expression gave Buffy hope, however. He said something. Kennedy turned back to Buffy. “He says he wants a gun.”

Gabriel’s eyes were fixed on Buffy now; he knew who he was negotiating with. He was trying to look tough, Buffy thought, but he looked so young. “He can have a gun, sure. If he goes back to Rome and trains as a Watcher.”

“I don’t believe this,” Kennedy muttered, but she repeated the offer for Gabriel; Buffy could pick out the word “Rome” in the middle of the unintelligible sentence.

Gabriel smiled like he’d just been offered an ice cream cone. “Okay!” he said, looking right at Buffy. “Okay.” He held out a hand like he wanted her to shake it. She reached out and sealed the deal with a firm handshake; Gabriel beamed, and Buffy grinned a little herself.

“This may just be the worst plan you’ve ever come up with,” Kennedy said.

“Not even close,” Buffy assured her. “Now, ask him about Carlos.”

Now that they had a deal, Gabriel chatted easily. “Carlos is building an army,” Kennedy translated. “All children. Street kids, mostly. Gabriel says the kids want to get vamped. He and his friend did, anyway. Carlos promises them power like they’ve never dreamed of. He promises them the chance to kill the police, to kill everybody they hate.”

“Oh God. How many of them are there?”

“He says hundreds. I think he doesn’t really know. We caught him before he could join up.”

Where are they?”

Kennedy relayed the question, but Buffy didn’t need to wait for a translation of Gabriel’s answer.

Hotel Inferno.

***

“Can you believe it?” Buffy asked as they left the free clinic. “After all that, the nest is in the exact place we were going to look for it yesterday?”

“At least now we have a better idea what we’re facing.” Kennedy waved down a cab for them. “What are you going to do about Gabriel?”

“I’ll have to talk to Giles about making him some travel documents.”

“You’re seriously going to bring him to Rome?”

“Well, I said I would, didn’t I?”

Kennedy shook her head in a you’ve lost it, girl, kind of way. “He’ll run away. Hopefully before you even get back to him, so he’ll save us all the trouble, but more likely he’ll wait till he gets to Rome and then run off with the first weapon he gets his hands on.”

“No he won’t,” Buffy said. “I’m giving him a home—a place to belong.”

Kennedy made an exasperated little noise, tapping the cab’s window with her fingernails. “Okay, never mind. The important thing is, we need a plan for attacking Carlos’s gang.”

“Oh, do we ever. Gabriel was probably wrong about the number of vamps, but I bet the group we dusted last night was less than half of them.”

“Our fighting strength is down to me and you. Oz and Willow are out of it.”

“And so are Spike and Xander,” Buffy agreed. “But hey, these mini-vamps aren’t as strong as the normal kind. We could probably take, like, ten each if they don’t see us coming.”

“But there might be more than that. And I bet Carlos and his inner circle will be closer to full-sized. Maybe we should call in reinforcements?”

Buffy shook her head. “The longer we wait, the more time they have to vamp more kids. And besides ... I’m not sure if reinforcements would be such a good idea.” To Kennedy’s quizzical look, she explained, “The rest of the Slayers are younger and newer than us. Fighting vamps that look like kids gives me a serious wiggins. I don’t know how many of the girls could handle it.”

Kennedy conceded the point with a nod. Buffy thought she’d maybe won her over a little with that you-and-me-versus-the-other-Slayers bit. It was true though—except for Faith, who was somewhere in Siberia, Kennedy was the closest Buffy had to a peer.

“So we’re it,” Kennedy said. “Okay. We’re going to need one hell of a good plan.”


***

Sadly, a good plan did not pop out of the shadows and throw itself at their feet on the way home. So they explained the situation to Xander and Willow, who were hanging out in the living room with the sleeping baby.

“Oh, God,” Willow said, “Those poor kids.”

Kennedy sat down beside her and put an arm around Willow’s shoulders. “Yeah, well, it’ll be poor us if we don’t stop them.”

“Maybe you should do some proper recon first,” Xander suggested. “Get a better idea of the layout, the actual numbers.”

Buffy shook her head. “It’d be hard to get in and out without being noticed.”

Xander looked thoughtful. “If you could find a choke point, like a doorway or something, the two of you could hold off a whole lot of vamps.”

“That might work, if we had some way to drive them out of the building,” Buffy mused. “Like, if we set it on fire—hey, could we just set the building on fire?”

“Too dangerous,” Kennedy said. “The buildings in the favela are all crowded together and flammable.”

“Besides, what if there are kids in there?” Willow said. “I mean, other recruits like Gabriel who haven’t been vamped yet?”

Buffy groaned. “I hadn’t even thought of that!”

“If they’re anything like Gabriel, those kids can take care of themselves,” Kennedy said. She didn’t sound terribly sympathetic.

Willow gave her an appalled look. “They’re children!”

“What we need is some way to take out the vamps without risking any civilians,” Xander said. “Think maybe we can get our hands on a blessed tanker truck? Flood the place with holy water?”

“Hey,” Buffy perked up, “That’s a great idea!”

Xander spread his hands. “I was joking. Where the hell would we get a tanker truck, to start with?”

“Oh, oh, I know!” Willow said. “I’ve been working on this sun ball spell...”

“Not that again,” Kennedy groaned. “Honey, you’ve been working on that spell for, like, years. It doesn’t work.”

“No, seriously, I almost had it last time.”

“Is this the same spell you were working on back in Sunnydale?” Buffy asked, tugging at vague memories of long-ago planning sessions. “The one where you use your light spell to make real sunlight, full of vitamin D and vamp-dusty goodness? That would’ve been so awesome. If it ever worked.”

“It will work,” Willow said. “It’s been done before. I found an old wizard’s notes in the attic of the Rome offices last time I was there. I just didn’t have time to finish working out the bugs before I got pregnant.”

“Bugs,” Kennedy repeated. “Like a sunburn over 95% of your body?”

Willow made a pshaw noise. “I’m a redhead from California. I laugh in the face of sunburn.”

Kennedy’s skepticism didn’t faze Buffy much. Experience said that if Willow thought she could do something, then she could. “Can you have it ready by tomorrow?” she asked.

“Are you kidding?” Kennedy said, moving protectively closer to Willow. “We have a new baby, remember? Willow’s a little busy.”

“There’s one of her and six of us,” Willow said to Kennedy. “I have to feed her, but if the rest of you take care of everything else, I’ll have time. I mean, if you have any better ideas, I’m right here with my ears.” She paused a moment to make her point, and then nodded. “All right. I nursed Tara right before you two got home, so she should be good for another couple of hours. If anybody needs me, I’ll be in the carport.”

***

Spike and Oz got back a little while later. Buffy awkwardly averted her eyes as Spike went straight to Xander and gave him a kiss. Unfortunately, this left her with a clear view of Kennedy’s affectionate greeting of Oz—only a hug and a kiss on the cheek, but knowing what she knew now it made Buffy blush.

“How did it go?” Xander asked immediately. He seemed to be asking Oz as much as Spike, but Oz just gave a little shrug.

“The nice lady doctor gave me a new prescription for meds,” Spike said. “Should help.”

“That’s it?”

“And some tests,” Oz added.

“She seemed to have a perverted interest in my blood, but it’s all right, I made sure I could see her reflection in the window,” Spike said.

“What do you mean?” asked Xander, apparently missing the joke that even Buffy had caught.

“Shh, luv,” Spike petted Xander’s cheek, “It’ll all be fine.”

“Where’s Willow?” Oz asked.

“Outside, working on the sun ball spell,” Kennedy said, sounding resigned to it.

“The one that never works?”

“She says it’ll work this time.”

“Okay.” Oz went over to the bassinet. “How’s Tara?”

Kennedy smiled. “Sleepy. Adorable.”

Buffy watched Oz and Kennedy just gaze into the bassinet and glow for a while. When it started to get weird, she turned to Spike and Xander, but they were gone. She heard their bedroom door closing.

Lonely. That was what she was feeling. She swallowed, smiled, and said, “I’ve got to call Giles and make the arrangements for Gabriel. I’ll be in the kitchen.”

Kennedy and Oz didn't even watch her go.



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[info]julia_here
2008-05-17 04:29 am UTC (link)
Oh, hey, so very glad to see this! Now if I can only get a chapter together before it's a year for me on my WIP. You've got a reason, I din't even have an excuse.

Kennedy hasn't learned that Buffy's impulses come from some place where the apparently crazy but actually perfect ideas come from, eh?

Julia, hoping the meds work, and all.

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 04:38 am UTC (link)
I will wave pompoms of encouragement for your WIP update. Woo! Pompoms!

And yeah, well, Kennedy's been through some Buffy plans that spectacularly worked and some that spectacularly didn't. But she's willing to give it a shot.

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[info]fenchurche
2008-05-17 04:29 am UTC (link)
New Chapter!!! Squee!!!!!

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 04:39 am UTC (link)
I am so excited to be posting again, and completely thrilled that anyone out there still cares! :D

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[info]fenchurche
2008-05-17 06:31 am UTC (link)
I actually just reread the series recently and was hoping we'd see more of it!!

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 11:44 am UTC (link)
Hey, great timing!

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Yay!
[info]speakr2customrs
2008-05-17 04:45 am UTC (link)
Normally I'd feel that the chapter was too small to warrant the use of the mighty Argentinosaurus of Approval but I think the occasion deserves it.

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Re: Yay!
[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 04:48 am UTC (link)
Awww, thanks!

It is awfully short, but I've been doing one POV per chapter and I want to switch to Xander's POV for the next bit.

Also, it had been over a year. And the baby's just started sleeping nicely in the evenings, but my parents are coming tomorrow to stay for five days. So I wanted to get something posted!

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[info]rainkatt
2008-05-17 05:45 am UTC (link)
SO cool to see more of this! I didn't even have to go back to catch up--it all made sense. YAY!!!

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 11:38 am UTC (link)
Oh, I'm so glad you could remember it! :D

I used to do a "Previously..." section before my posts, but this time, despite how useful it would obviously be, I felt like if I stopped to do that it might be another month before I could post!

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[info]rainkatt
2008-05-17 01:15 pm UTC (link)
You tagged; it's extremely easy to check the last chapter(s) that way. I remember loving the previouslies, but it wasn't a requirement. :-)

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[info]tucker_t
2008-05-17 09:53 am UTC (link)
So glad to see this back. After a long time without updating I typically archive WIP files as it is too painful to see them sitting there. However, I kept this on the 'front page' and am delighted that you are picking it up again.

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 11:44 am UTC (link)
Aw, thanks for your faith in me! Hopefully now I'll starting getting chapters out a bit more regularly again.

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[info]spikechris
2008-05-17 09:57 am UTC (link)
Oh so happy, I did the Snoopy Dance when I saw this. Thanks so much and a good way for the story to progress. You're still keeping us guessing about Poor Spike though.

Chrissie

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 11:46 am UTC (link)
Yup! No answers about Spike yet ... he'll actually be in more of the next chapter, though, so that's something! :)

Glad to see you're still around!

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[info]sciencegeek
2008-05-17 02:04 pm UTC (link)
Yay, new chapter!

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 06:26 pm UTC (link)
Thanks for still being here! And also, yay, Tosh!

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[info]thedeadlyhook
2008-05-17 03:58 pm UTC (link)
Oh, wonderful! I'm so glad to see this story again.

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-17 06:26 pm UTC (link)
Yay! :)

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[info]timeofchange
2008-05-18 11:32 am UTC (link)
Wowowow! I can't tell you how happy I am to see that you have not abandoned this story. Great update. I love your Buffy in this story.

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-19 01:19 am UTC (link)
Yay! I'm glad you're still reading. :)

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[info]moscow_watcher
2008-05-18 06:40 pm UTC (link)
New chapter! Yay! You made my day!

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-19 01:20 am UTC (link)
And your comment makes mine, so that's fair! :D

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[info]candleanfeather
2008-05-19 06:15 pm UTC (link)
Yeah, another chapter. It's great to see this story back. Thank you Shadowscast.

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[info]shadowscast
2008-05-22 01:23 am UTC (link)
You're welcome! :)

Thanks for commenting.

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[info]cowboyguy
2008-05-28 12:39 pm UTC (link)
*does the Xander Snoopy dance* Hooray! An update!
So glad to see you're still working on this.

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[info]shadowscast
2008-06-01 12:15 am UTC (link)
I'm glad you're still reading! :)

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YAY!!!!
[info]clarityqueen
2008-06-03 08:16 pm UTC (link)
Thank you soooooo much for continuing this story! I absolutely love it and was so delighted to see another chapter posted. Keep up the brilliant work! Hope to see more very soon!

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Re: YAY!!!!
[info]shadowscast
2008-06-05 03:40 am UTC (link)
Thanks for the feedback! It's so encouraging to know that I still have interested readers. :)

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[info]spikechris
2008-09-08 10:11 pm UTC (link)
It's my birthday in a couple of weeks, so is there any chance of a chapter for my present, pretty please, I've just re-read this and now I can't wait for another chapter.

Chrissie

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[info]shadowscast
2008-09-10 01:33 am UTC (link)
Oh, wow, happy birthday! I'm afraid your birthday present will be late, though! Man, motherhood has really slowed down my writing output.

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[info]mulder200
2008-09-22 03:13 pm UTC (link)
I am so glad to see another chapter of this story. ALthough, I am terribly worried about poor Spike.

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[info]shadowscast
2009-05-08 03:09 am UTC (link)
Oh my goodness, I'm so slow with responding to comments—I'm sorry!

I am, of course, very happy to hear that you enjoyed this chapter (way back when I posted it!).

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[info]ladycat713
2008-10-21 08:33 am UTC (link)
I just ran across this and am gonna track the entry tag so that I can keep up when you update. Am I right in thinking Spike might have TB like his mother did. He might have just caught it when he was turned and that's something that most hospitals wouldn't routinely test for.

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[info]shadowscast
2009-05-08 03:12 am UTC (link)
I'm keeping mum as to what's wrong with Spike, but I can tell you that it'll come out in the story very soon! (Er, soon chapter-wise that is ... how long it'll be in RL before I manage to write and post that chapter, who can say? Look how long it took me just to respond to your kind feedback!)

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[info]sablerose2
2008-11-02 08:14 pm UTC (link)
More soon please!!!?? Just reread this am happy to see this new part

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[info]shadowscast
2009-05-08 03:12 am UTC (link)
Well, soon isn't looking probable. :P But eventually, I swear! And I am very, very happy to hear that you've been enjoying the story so far!

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[info]the_summoning_d
2008-11-04 02:42 am UTC (link)
Ooo, I likes this fic. Is very good. Willow's adorable with her baby, and I love Xander and Human!Spike together.

Also, I'm going to take a guess here and say Spike has cancer. Possibly leukaemia. Or maybe lung cancer.

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[info]shadowscast
2009-05-08 03:14 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you like it! Sorry for the very slow updates (and the very slow responses to comments).

As for your guesses, I am of course neither confirming or denying at this point—but it does please me to see people guessing!

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[info]green_maia
2009-01-06 02:12 am UTC (link)
I can't believe I missed this when you posted it! I'm so glad you're still working on it! I love this story, and this is a wonderful chapter!

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[info]shadowscast
2009-05-08 03:15 am UTC (link)
Well, hey, the great thing about following a story that updates, like, once a year is that you have lots of time to catch up on the latest chapter. Right? Right? :P

Sorry, as always, for my slowness in all things! I am nevertheless very, very pleased to have your feedback. :)

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[info]whyskeyeyes
2009-05-06 12:29 am UTC (link)
Are you still working on this story because I love it and would like to read more.

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[info]shadowscast
2009-05-08 03:01 am UTC (link)
I am still working on the story, but with a glacial slowness!

I am of course very happy to hear that you've enjoyed it so far. I hope that the long waits between chapters aren't too off-putting!

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[info]shadowscast
2009-05-08 03:21 am UTC (link)
Oh, wait—did you realize that this isn't quite the last chapter that's been posted? (Chapter 13 is up as of a few months ago—check the tag.)

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